Fourth of July

Fourth — laughing at
Granny’s house at dusk
Cousin and aunt join the revels
Sparklers pop and fizzle in our small hands
I write my name in burning lights
Family fun in the
Summer — Fourth of

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  1. Jaan Pehchaan

     /  July 4, 2011

    Well done for Fourth of July – here is mine:

  2. yeah, family fun,
    how divine.

    love your combined tribe of family and 4th of July.
    enjoy a lovely day!

  3. Sounds as if you all spent a wonderful day! Lovely prose.

    Yes, the friend is my best friend and has been for 12 years now. :)

  4. Kay Salady

     /  July 5, 2011

    Simplistic splendor! I was at “granny’s house” last night with my family . . . sparklers in hand. Fourth of July! It was great, and so was your wonderful poem. Thank you!

  5. Very sweet memory =)

  6. celebrating Independence with the family awesome. :)

  7. carefreewanderer

     /  July 6, 2011

    This is so beautifully warm. Loved every bit! :)


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