Waterfall

Falling
Water tumble
Down, sparkling in the green
Mossy world, liquid beauty shine
Hiding cool cave behind the sheaf of blue
Crashing into the pool deep, dark
Glimmering fish swim with
Golden flashes
Falling

cross-posted on Daily Writing Practice

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  1. My first visit here and I like what I see. Your piece written here is beautifully done and much as my prose I write on my own site. I, too, like to take my writing a bit further.

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  2. what a delight to see you in.
    stunning write.
    Cheers.

    :)

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  3. Very cool, vivid and inviting. Tumbling is the catalyst. Good poem!

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  4. Lovely !

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  5. Nicely done!

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  6. beautiful imagery… well written

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  7. This is wonderful the imagery really takes you write there, you’ve captured the magic of the waterfall too

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