Doubts

I hear them
Whispering to me
In the dark
Telling me
I can’t do it, but I know
They are wrong, I can!

For Monday Poetry Potluck. I tried a shadorma, a Spanish syllabic form. Thanks to Vinay for introducing it to me.

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7 Comments

  1. I love how you prove it wrong! :)

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  2. inspiring write :) well written

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  3. agree……

    love it.
    superb job!

    A++

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  4. LOVE it!!!

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  5. Wonderful and inspiring words! :D xx

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  6. They are wrong!
    Lovely writing.

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  7. Bravo!
    Very nice … Poem and sentiment both.

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