Fallen

Dreaming
That night changed it
All — she had never been
The same — never could be — that girl
Was gone — lost in someone else’s anger
But maybe a new innocence
Could be found, forged in love
And forgiveness
Dreaming

Written for Daily Writing Practice. Posted here for Poetry Potluck.

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8 Comments

  1. dream changes things, wow,

    lovely message, love heals everything,
    A++
    ;)

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  2. “But maybe a new innocence could be found, forged in love, forgivness…Dreaming”
    I love the hope of those words…and the possiblity that innocence can be reclaimed.
    Loved reading this! :)
    Stopping by from Jingle Poetry

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  3. NotATameLion

     /  March 21, 2011

    Kind of a double-edged sword. The losing of the past, the re-weaving of the future.

    Thanks for sharing this poem.

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  4. My first visit to your blog. Lots of good things to explore. I like your style of conciseness and yet so touching. hugs,pat

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  5. great one liz and thanks for always coming by mine.. here’s my potluck http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/25/paper-scribbles/

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  6. I found the “breadcrumb” you left at Pat’s site … and followed it! I am delighted I did … thank you for sharing … look forward to more visits! becca

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