Bubbles

Bubble
Floating prism
Drifting along, catching
Light – a rainbow thing of beauty
Created of soap and breath – caught in the air
Skyward on a sudden updraft
Down towards the grass,
Sparkling along
Pop!

Cross-posted on Daily Writing Practice, posted here for Monday Poetry Potluck

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10 Comments

  1. Jessicas Japes

     /  December 6, 2010

    Really cute! And the layout is clever too, creating the shape.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/12/06/snow/

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  2. Light and lifting as the bubble.

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  3. Jingle

     /  December 6, 2010

    adorable piece.
    Thanks for sharing…

    A+

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  4. Enjoyed the form and the breezy feel of the poem. Makes me want to go blow bubbles…I think I still have some liver-flavored ones someone gave us for the dogs. (yuk)

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  5. Nice design on this piece – the format helps in giving it a nice, easy flow. Very light-spirited and upbeat work…thanks for sharing!

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  6. This was fanciful and light – just like watching a bubble floating about.

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  7. hope you well..

    prayers….
    stay blessed.
    Merry Christmas.

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