Lust: A Poem for Poetry Potluck

I crave her body
I need her so each moment
Why won’t she have me?

A fictional poem for the theme of ‘the seven deadly sins’ at Monday Poetry Potluck.

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  1. great haiku for this theme? Isn’t that the ultimate question of lust?!

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  2. question of lust?
    why can’t I hold her now

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  3. I love the question asked…nice!

    Cheers!

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  4. nice, lusty haiku :)

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  5. simple but powerful.
    love it.
    xx

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  6. Now that is what I call a perfect haiku….awesome my friend and thanks so much for linking oxoxoxox

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  7. I am just blown away by the power, this is a great haiku!

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  8. what a pity! i felt sorry for him/her. what an emotionally-packed haiku, morganna. brilliant! :)

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  9. Hi there, Morganna!
    We’ve all asked that question.
    Yes! Cravings and desires…
    Why do they make us suffer so?
    You’ve hit the nail on the head — lust.

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  10. so pragmatic– nice write!

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  11. Ha! The big “Why” ??? Love it …

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