Surfer

The swell rises and falls
Tumbling water from sea to land
The man on the board rides
The wave, becoming one with the sea.

Cross-posted at Write With Pictures for Thursday The prompt. Posted for the Monday Poetry Potluck.

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  1. love the image,
    sea views with a man in it is blissful.

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  2. Thanks for the contribution, Happy monday!
    love your treat, very delicious…
    link up to 3 poems if you wish, old poems are welcome.

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  3. Luke Prater

     /  October 4, 2010

    Short and quite evocative; strong imagery. Did you start all lines with a ‘T’ on purpose? It adds something visually for me.

    Cheers

    Luke @ WordSalad

    mine are here:

    Miss: http://wp.me/pTeVg-ac

    World Makes the Music Go Round: http://wp.me/pTeVg-aF

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  4. I enjoy visiting your garden and, today, riding the waves.
    Victoria

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  5. a perfect description!

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  6. Becoming one with the sea… just like meditating.. I enjoyed it.. thanks for sharing..

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  7. Well written with vivid imagery. Nice!

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  8. support us by visiting a few poets near your entry.
    thanks for the contribution…

    here is one of mine:
    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/04/what-can-you-see/

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  9. brilliant..
    you made a clear picture in my mind :D

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  10. Chloe

     /  October 15, 2010

    Beautiful words which create really strong imagery. Thanks xx

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