In the Moment

Within the moment darkness
Arises unspeaking and silent
Opens the door to vision
Truth hangs suspended

Arises unspeaking and silent
Moving shimmering into the world
Truth hangs suspended
In time awaiting the moment

Moving shimmering into the world
Long awaited as glances become words
In time awaiting the moment
Yet unspoken

Long awaited as glances become words
Open the door to vision
Yet unspoken
Within the moment – darkness.

Posted for the Monday morning Poetry Potluck at Jingle Poetry

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18 Comments

  1. sweet surprise from you.

    love the fresh taste of your poetry..
    Happy monday!

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  2. twilight awaits before darkness…
    love your spirits in the work…
    brilliant job!

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  3. brilliant job!

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  4. Quite lovely. I read it as the creative process … and enjoyed it much.

    Happy potluck!

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  5. signed .............bkm

     /  September 20, 2010

    long awaited glances become words…..very nice…bkm

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  6. i really like this poem.
    it generates a great atmosphere

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  7. beautiful flow, morganna! what a brilliant piece!

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  8. Ooooohhh…LOVED the form, and the excellent way in which you executed it! Very impressive!
    I could read many meanings into this one… a lover’s gaze, a night waiting for tomorrow, a day about to begin, hushed feelings… whooaa!!! Maybe I am all off, but that’s just me… going all ga-ga over this poem as ever!

    Thank you so much for linking it with poetry potluck…. and we are SO GLAD to have you here!!! Yaaayyyy :D

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    • Thanks — you make me smile :) It is meant to have many meanings, and I’m glad you like it in all its multiplicity.

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  9. Happy Thursday!

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  10. http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/poetry-potluck-natures-elements-air.html
    Greetings, friend!!
    It is Monday, I sincerely invite you to join us for a Monday Poetry Potluck party, bring in 1 to 3 poem treats to share, and have fun tasting other poets treats.
    You will have 60 hours enjoying the fun.
    Hurry up, the more you share, the happier we are.
    Hope to see you in our party, hurry up, the earlier you are in, the more traffic you get…
    to link in, click on the link via this comment, then look at the blue link button at the end of the post, click on the button, have your poem link copy and pasted in the first box, then enter your name, at last your email address…let us know if you need help by leaving a comment under the same post…

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  11. Anonymous

     /  October 6, 2010

    Brilliant blog, I had not come across lizbethsgarden.wordpress.com previously during my searches!
    Continue the good work!

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