Untitled Poem

existence is not

all depends on all

see the world

create it anew every moment

i am not

seeing the creation

i become

created by the world

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21 Comments

  1. Whoa, I can’t tell you exactly what it is about this piece, but I really, really love it!

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  2. I love how the type comes in all directions just like the forces in our life beyond our control. nice piece!

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  3. Very, very beautiful.

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  4. hmmm excellent to become..

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  5. a thinking piece…off i go to think ;)

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  6. soulintention: signed .............bkm

     /  June 9, 2010

    fresh look at creating and creation…..well done….bkm

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  7. nice flow – and change in meaning with each verse

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  8. Seth

     /  June 10, 2010

    wow, I’ve read it 5 times and every time I start thinking about it in another way. brilliant.

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  9. fantastic, wise and true. very beautiful.

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  10. beautiful indeeed :D

    im here from Jingle’s Rally
    you can view my poem at
    http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/06/10/thursday-poets-rally-pain-reprise/

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  11. so profound! a perfect picture of inner peace and bliss! lovely poem indeed =)

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  12. if this is about Buddhism…my dear..BRAVO..
    you speak wisely..
    mine is here
    Have you a rocking week!
    hugs
    shakira

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  13. hot. a great truth conveyed ever so nicely…

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  14. sweet and joyful!

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  15. lovely..
    A++

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  16. Jessica

     /  January 18, 2011

    A nice twisting around of words and ides here! And the layout worked so well with it.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/01/17/rain/

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  17. Scent of my heart

     /  January 18, 2011

    Brilliant sound …

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