In the Dark

whisper to me
tell me who i am
walk with me
show me the path
dance with me
I live.

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  1. simple but fun,
    powerful poem!
    loved it and hope that you enjoy visiting poets..

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  2. soulintention: signed .............bkm

     /  June 3, 2010

    nice …dance with me, I live….beautiful… bkm

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  3. nice….there is so much life in the dance…

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  4. serious urging to the fun and freedom of dance – wonderful and light!

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  5. great morganna- simple yet direct!

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  6. Ms. Peaches

     /  June 3, 2010

    I like this…I find that the shortest poems are often more powerful than some longer ones! thanks for checking me out!

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  7. This is simple and succinct. I like it.

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  8. Kelsey

     /  June 3, 2010

    Short and powerful. Love it!

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  9. succinct but to the point , well done .

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  10. This made me feel like I had taken a long journey by taking a few simple steps…nicely written!

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  11. simply adorable. just loved it.

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  12. lovely..hey & thats from a man

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  13. So much said with an economy of words. You chose each perfectly for maximum effect. Great job?

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  14. Very nice — I love the simplicity!

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  15. Mandy

     /  July 1, 2010

    This is beautiful!

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