Day’s End

Let go today,
The sorrows and pleasures,
Free them
Lay down your head
Close your eyes
Accept the dark
Let go the day

cross-posted on Friday’s post at Write With Pictures.

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14 Comments

  1. uplifting advice.

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  2. a fine lullaby. thank you.

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  3. mairmusic

     /  June 3, 2010

    The short lines give more intensity to a simple thought– nicely done!

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  4. such a good night sleep. love it :)

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  5. Jessica

     /  January 31, 2011

    That seems so straightforward yet there’s a lot in there – is it about sleep or death? Makes me want to reread several times.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/01/31/first-date/

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  6. Thanks for sharing…
    smart piece…

    best regards.

    A++

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  7. thingy

     /  January 31, 2011

    Profound words. So hard, but I try. : /

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  8. Really sound advice, strung together in a lovely way. Thanks!

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  9. Lovely poem

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    cheers.

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