Paradise

Silver
Green garden, land
Of paradise, Bird so
Sweet colors gleaming flitting through
The trees flowering heavenly floating
Smells arise love among the walls
Set down in a golden
Land of honey
Silver.

This is a rictameter. The lines have a syllable count of 2/4/6/8/10/8/6/4/2. The first and last lines are identical. Thanks to Words, Words, Words (and Phrases) for the idea. I also wrote another rictameter for today’s prompt over at Write With Pictures.

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